This is truly a love story. I love the way they meet and everything else. Your descriptions are brilliant.
I like the use of color. It opens the first scenes and is an ongoing theme. -B. J. Winters
You have something very special here. It is a world you could not have known personally, but which is completely believable and that is all writers aim to do, but only the really good ones can acheive it as well as you have. -Philip Carlton